I'm so glad you got on that writing binge, because this turned out magical for it. I've read certain Days over and over and it's still all I can do to take in everything. Day 11 is my favorite. The best thing is the spaces between words and the limitless meaning in some of these lines, and how it's more to that end the further apart Dom fractures. It's gorgeous, it's lyrical. The ending made my stomach lurch. The whole thing is exquisite.
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Date: 2012-11-30 05:13 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you got on that writing binge, because this turned out magical for it. I've read certain Days over and over and it's still all I can do to take in everything. Day 11 is my favorite. The best thing is the spaces between words and the limitless meaning in some of these lines, and how it's more to that end the further apart Dom fractures. It's gorgeous, it's lyrical. The ending made my stomach lurch. The whole thing is exquisite.
Yeeessssss Kat, yyeeeesssssss.