first of all, thank you for trusting me with your baby and letting me get an early peek at this genius. like i said, you should be making money off of this fic/idea/world/concept. i'm serious, it's just that brilliant and unique and cool.
second, i'll restate how much i love your matthew. the way you are writing his discovery of the new world and the whole connection to how babies learn and what do babies feel when they learn to cry and mov their limbs? is it pain like matthew? did we feel pain while learning to use our bodies but we just don't remember it? all these questions are due to your writing...it's just incredible.
the spiders and ripping open of matthew's skin = CRINGECITY!!!! but really well written.
finally, i loved dom's presence being on the outside of matt's vision but always around. mysteeerious!
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Date: 2012-04-17 06:09 am (UTC)first of all, thank you for trusting me with your baby and letting me get an early peek at this genius. like i said, you should be making money off of this fic/idea/world/concept. i'm serious, it's just that brilliant and unique and cool.
second, i'll restate how much i love your matthew. the way you are writing his discovery of the new world and the whole connection to how babies learn and what do babies feel when they learn to cry and mov their limbs? is it pain like matthew? did we feel pain while learning to use our bodies but we just don't remember it? all these questions are due to your writing...it's just incredible.
the spiders and ripping open of matthew's skin = CRINGECITY!!!! but really well written.
finally, i loved dom's presence being on the outside of matt's vision but always around. mysteeerious!
i just love this whole thing!!!<3