What. This. I. Really... Oh my gosh. This story broke my heart </3 beautifully written, but heart-breaking. It felt as if I was truly there, you know? I was lost in another world. The ending killed me, it was so sad. I think you were trying to make it hopeful, but I just saw it as the complete opposite: hopeless. Because they'll just end up back to where they were if they were to fall in love.
WHICH BRINGS ME TO THIS: when Matthew and Dom were making love, and Matthew said "I can't do this. Not again.", I wondered who he was referring to because Dom got jealous.... But as I finished the story, it dawned on me. Was it Dom? I mean, even in the ending, you hint that they might become friends and possibly, lovers again. so, I wonder how many times Dom has had to go thought that. Of course, he doesn't know the punishments he's been through, but Matthew has. Have him and Dom fallen in love more than one time? I mean, do they just repeat the cycle?
D: anyways, this story was so sad but I absolutely loved it. Totally meming!
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Date: 2012-04-02 06:36 am (UTC)This story broke my heart </3 beautifully written, but heart-breaking. It felt as if I was truly there, you know? I was lost in another world. The ending killed me, it was so sad. I think you were trying to make it hopeful, but I just saw it as the complete opposite: hopeless. Because they'll just end up back to where they were if they were to fall in love. WHICH BRINGS ME TO THIS: when Matthew and Dom were making love, and Matthew said "I can't do this. Not again.", I wondered who he was referring to because Dom got jealous.... But as I finished the story, it dawned on me. Was it Dom? I mean, even in the ending, you hint that they might become friends and possibly, lovers again. so, I wonder how many times Dom has had to go thought that. Of course, he doesn't know the punishments he's been through, but Matthew has. Have him and Dom fallen in love more than one time? I mean, do they just repeat the cycle? D: anyways, this story was so sad but I absolutely loved it. Totally meming!