I feel quite bad for commenting on this story only now - even though I started commenting again only recently because schools been a bitch... but well :/ First off: I love your writing style, because it's very fluent and you seem to choose your words carefully...I don't really know how to explain, I just like it - it's captivating ^^ What also intrigues me is the progression of the characters. I really loved how it took Dom some time to realize that he in fact WANTED Matt and how it also took him some time to deal with the whole situation. Also Matt's caution concerning relationships and his thoughts when Julia left - I was hoping he wouldn't just jump into Dom's arms when he found out about it. It's a good thing he hesitated, it's so much more realistic that way - that's also the reason I'm glad they're taking it slow. It was heartbreaking to see Dom realize what a great loss he suffered when Julia left, but that's the way it is when a person that knows you inside out; that you trusted with your life leaves. Actually the whole story is very realistic to me - the pacing, the characters' flaws (I hate it when they're described as perfect and flawless and blablah...they're human beings after all ;)) the storyline ... I hope you get my point xD
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Date: 2011-02-25 09:20 am (UTC)First off: I love your writing style, because it's very fluent and you seem to choose your words carefully...I don't really know how to explain, I just like it - it's captivating ^^
What also intrigues me is the progression of the characters. I really loved how it took Dom some time to realize that he in fact WANTED Matt and how it also took him some time to deal with the whole situation. Also Matt's caution concerning relationships and his thoughts when Julia left - I was hoping he wouldn't just jump into Dom's arms when he found out about it. It's a good thing he hesitated, it's so much more realistic that way - that's also the reason I'm glad they're taking it slow. It was heartbreaking to see Dom realize what a great loss he suffered when Julia left, but that's the way it is when a person that knows you inside out; that you trusted with your life leaves. Actually the whole story is very realistic to me - the pacing, the characters' flaws (I hate it when they're described as perfect and flawless and blablah...they're human beings after all ;)) the storyline ...
I hope you get my point xD