Let me premise this feedback by saying Bedroom Acoustics made a lovely soundtrack to this update...
Yet another fantastic chapter! The scene between Matt and Dom in the bathroom had me wriggling in my chair and just on the edge with anticipation. When Matt began whispering in Spanish, all I could think was, "Fuck! Why didn't I pay more attention in high school?" But the fact that I didn't have a clue in hell what he was saying did not detract from the electricity of that particular encounter.
So, Dom came rather hard, and happened to say a certain person's name as he did...I hope I am not alone in kinda wishing the next chapter opens with Julia beating the holy hell out of Dom with a shower curtain rod...
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Date: 2011-01-21 05:52 pm (UTC)Yet another fantastic chapter! The scene between Matt and Dom in the bathroom had me wriggling in my chair and just on the edge with anticipation. When Matt began whispering in Spanish, all I could think was, "Fuck! Why didn't I pay more attention in high school?" But the fact that I didn't have a clue in hell what he was saying did not detract from the electricity of that particular encounter.
So, Dom came rather hard, and happened to say a certain person's name as he did...I hope I am not alone in kinda wishing the next chapter opens with Julia beating the holy hell out of Dom with a shower curtain rod...