There are so many things I want to say about his chapter that I don’t know where to begin. I want to talk about everything but I will spare you from my rambling and go to the point. ( I can’t promise you coherence because I’ve been wanting to comment here for so many days so I’m kind of exited) Ok so I’ll start by saying that this was an astonishing chapter and that you dear are an amazing, wonderful, lovely, incredibly talented…. Writer (the least goes on and on but you get the point)
You must be really proud of your work because it is magnificent (magnificent is not enough but my knowledge of English is not so broad) this story is so beautiful!! And you have maintained its perfectness in all the chapters. I read your note on the last chapter and I couldn’t believe you had doubts about the “quality” of the latest chapters. I have been in love with this story from the beginning and I have to say that I haven’t felt a difference; to me it’s always been brilliant and I can’t think of a single thing about it that I didn’t love; it has been a pleasure for me to read every single one of your updates, they all have been perfect!!!
Now back to this chapter ;)
I’m so happy the boys finally opened up and confessed their feelings for each other, and I’m even happier because Dom admitted his feelings to himself. They words they used (actually you used) were so beautiful!!!! I think I read this part like a hundred times because it is so lovely! And I squealed more that once while I was reading it.
You just made everything so real, I know we all want for them to be together and happy; but real life is not that easy and think this is one of the things that make this story so appealing and brilliant, the fact that you can believe and relied to every one of your characters and their lives.
I’m really proud of Matt’s attitude in front this entire situation, thinking about Julia and caring about her feelings, even though Dominic’s words meant so much for him, made him more admirable than he already was. But the fact that he also refused to ignore what had been said and go back to “normal” made me love him even more.
“Nothing will be normal for us again, because every time I look at you, you will know. And every time you look at me, I will know."
You just killed me with this… your amazing!!!!!
I was holding my breath during the part Dominic returned to his flat. Dom’s internal battled that you have described through the entire story reached a peak in this chapter. I have never been in a situation like Dom’s (being torn between two amazing guys, not even close to that) but your words made me feel and comprehend everything he was going through, and even if I’m not happy with how this chapter ended (and this has nothing to do with your conclusion because it was brilliant and shocking) I meant the fact that he let Julia to blew him after what just happened with Mathew, I can’t be mad at Dom because your descriptions of the entire situation and the confusion he was feeling made feel bad for him, he has a hard decision to make and must be horrible to be in his place and your words made comprehend that.
Well I guess I’ll leave this comment now because I just saw you updated chapter 16 :D
Sorry for commenting so late; but like I said college was (is) driving me insane.
Thank you for writing this beautiful story and sharing it with all of us!!! Lots of love and hugs <333
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Date: 2011-01-21 07:00 pm (UTC)Ok so I’ll start by saying that this was an astonishing chapter and that you dear are an amazing, wonderful, lovely, incredibly talented…. Writer (the least goes on and on but you get the point)
You must be really proud of your work because it is magnificent (magnificent is not enough but my knowledge of English is not so broad) this story is so beautiful!! And you have maintained its perfectness in all the chapters. I read your note on the last chapter and I couldn’t believe you had doubts about the “quality” of the latest chapters. I have been in love with this story from the beginning and I have to say that I haven’t felt a difference; to me it’s always been brilliant and I can’t think of a single thing about it that I didn’t love; it has been a pleasure for me to read every single one of your updates, they all have been perfect!!!
Now back to this chapter ;)
I’m so happy the boys finally opened up and confessed their feelings for each other, and I’m even happier because Dom admitted his feelings to himself. They words they used (actually you used) were so beautiful!!!! I think I read this part like a hundred times because it is so lovely! And I squealed more that once while I was reading it.
You just made everything so real, I know we all want for them to be together and happy; but real life is not that easy and think this is one of the things that make this story so appealing and brilliant, the fact that you can believe and relied to every one of your characters and their lives.
I’m really proud of Matt’s attitude in front this entire situation, thinking about Julia and caring about her feelings, even though Dominic’s words meant so much for him, made him more admirable than he already was. But the fact that he also refused to ignore what had been said and go back to “normal” made me love him even more.
“Nothing will be normal for us again, because every time I look at you, you will know. And every time you look at me, I will know."
You just killed me with this… your amazing!!!!!
I was holding my breath during the part Dominic returned to his flat. Dom’s internal battled that you have described through the entire story reached a peak in this chapter. I have never been in a situation like Dom’s (being torn between two amazing guys, not even close to that) but your words made me feel and comprehend everything he was going through, and even if I’m not happy with how this chapter ended (and this has nothing to do with your conclusion because it was brilliant and shocking) I meant the fact that he let Julia to blew him after what just happened with Mathew, I can’t be mad at Dom because your descriptions of the entire situation and the confusion he was feeling made feel bad for him, he has a hard decision to make and must be horrible to be in his place and your words made comprehend that.
Well I guess I’ll leave this comment now because I just saw you updated chapter 16 :D
Sorry for commenting so late; but like I said college was (is) driving me insane.
Thank you for writing this beautiful story and sharing it with all of us!!!
Lots of love and hugs <333
Talk to you on the next chapter ;)