Aww Dom... You write his confliction and confusion so well. These little things, like editing the text to Julia and Matt's pet name, it makes so much difference. And sense.
Matt! The studio part was just fantastic, Matt's improvisation and singing (in Spanish. I suspect this must have been very hard for a certain blonde, rushing away and all? lol ok I'm gonna keep telling myself that at least). Poor Matt when Ian remained all quiet and he got all nervous! And then thinking he was so awful he made Dom leave. Bad Dom! But aww so happy for him Ian liked it! That hug at the end (and, ok I admit it, Dom's whimper) made me smile so hard!! Gah, I love this! Wonderful chapter as always, I know I always say that, but it IS the twuth!
You know, on the bus on my way home today, I was listening to Mercy. Saw that song was on the soundtrack (which I loved btw) and I can't help but think of this fic every time I listen to it :P which I like. A lot.
Wonderful job, I seriously love this and I can't wait for more! *greedy* <3333
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Date: 2010-12-06 02:21 pm (UTC)Matt! The studio part was just fantastic, Matt's improvisation and singing (in Spanish. I suspect this must have been very hard for a certain blonde, rushing away and all? lol ok I'm gonna keep telling myself that at least). Poor Matt when Ian remained all quiet and he got all nervous! And then thinking he was so awful he made Dom leave. Bad Dom! But aww so happy for him Ian liked it! That hug at the end (and, ok I admit it, Dom's whimper) made me smile so hard!! Gah, I love this! Wonderful chapter as always, I know I always say that, but it IS the twuth!
You know, on the bus on my way home today, I was listening to Mercy. Saw that song was on the soundtrack (which I loved btw) and I can't help but think of this fic every time I listen to it :P which I like. A lot.
Wonderful job, I seriously love this and I can't wait for more! *greedy* <3333