I loved the undercurrent of their hidden emotions, the attraction that they're both trying (more or less) to avoid, the fact that they're drawn to each other more than they care to admit... I could go on for the next hour, but I think you get my point.
Your story is greatly crafted, it's charming and it's gotten under my skin so badly, that I've re-read the previous chapters before this one, just to savour it even more...
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Date: 2010-12-03 09:31 pm (UTC)I loved the undercurrent of their hidden emotions, the attraction that they're both trying (more or less) to avoid, the fact that they're drawn to each other more than they care to admit... I could go on for the next hour, but I think you get my point.
Your story is greatly crafted, it's charming and it's gotten under my skin so badly, that I've re-read the previous chapters before this one, just to savour it even more...
Great job!