Date: 2010-10-02 05:22 am (UTC)
Oh wow! I love this story! This was great! The description of Dominic was just perfect. And I loved these lines:

But as they walked closer to one another, their shadows entwined gingerly, for a moment giving the impression that they were kissing in a tight embrace.

So beautiful. The last bit was powerful and heartbreaking.
I can't wait for more!
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