So, I already knew what a fantastic writer you are, which is why I shouldn't be surprised at how exceptionally good this is. But still, with the first sentence you managed to set the tone and the mood for the whole story and it just draws you in further from there. Now, possession (demonic or otherwise) and domination scare the crap out of me, which is also why I love reading about it. And this? This was not an exception.
Intense and terrifying. Perfect. Your language creates such vivid images and starts a riot of feelings. And that ending, holy crap.
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So, I already knew what a fantastic writer you are, which is why I shouldn't be surprised at how exceptionally good this is. But still, with the first sentence you managed to set the tone and the mood for the whole story and it just draws you in further from there. Now, possession (demonic or otherwise) and domination scare the crap out of me, which is also why I love reading about it. And this? This was not an exception.
Intense and terrifying. Perfect. Your language creates such vivid images and starts a riot of feelings. And that ending, holy crap.
Loved this <3