First of all, I need to apologise for my absence - Real lif'e's a bitch!
This chapter is just brilliant. If anyone else had written it, it would be pure filth (and nothing wrong with that). Your words however are lithe and graceful like a breathless ballet, bypassing eye and brain and dancing directly on the soul.
While I hate having to wait from chapter to chapter, wanting to drink in more and more of their love, I am happy that they are not rushed. You take the time to describe every detail with all the senses leaving your readers not as voyeurs but as participants, loving and lusting at your whim. I am hopelessly in love with your Matt.
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First of all, I need to apologise for my absence - Real lif'e's a bitch!
This chapter is just brilliant. If anyone else had written it, it would be pure filth (and nothing wrong with that). Your words however are lithe and graceful like a breathless ballet, bypassing eye and brain and dancing directly on the soul.
While I hate having to wait from chapter to chapter, wanting to drink in more and more of their love, I am happy that they are not rushed. You take the time to describe every detail with all the senses leaving your readers not as voyeurs but as participants, loving and lusting at your whim. I am hopelessly in love with your Matt.