ext_41858 ([identity profile] theyellow-daisy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lalalive23 2012-04-02 03:16 pm (UTC)

Omg! Dead and dying :'(

You always write wonderfully, but this was beautiful. Such a heartbreaking story, but I like the way you put the flashbacks in the middle of the rest of the story. Maybe it's just my sick mind, but it made me feel a little better.

I 'm glad we ended on a bit of a positive note, although still completely heartbreaking. Tears for days.

Brilliant job!

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