How do you write what is basically smut and make it so lyrical, so evocative. I wanted to read this chapter aloud just to feel your words rolling on my tongue.
When Dom said "when I'm around you all I want you to do is just...consume me. I could feel that passion flowing through me. And your love of Matt's eyes, the blue references, so beautiful. I am in love with your words, your imagery and your beautiful story.
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Date: 2011-06-05 10:03 pm (UTC)When Dom said "when I'm around you all I want you to do is just...consume me. I could feel that passion flowing through me. And your love of Matt's eyes, the blue references, so beautiful. I am in love with your words, your imagery and your beautiful story.