ext_41654 ([identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lalalive23 2011-03-25 03:49 am (UTC)

SO much to love about this, the narration is crisp and cheeky and damn hot!

The braces... the braces, I can't even handle it. And the riding, what is it about Matt riding Dom that is so damn hot? :D

He takes care of this because the vein in his neck has been throbbing from the effort of not moving, so he finally lowers his hips into the mattress only to come up once more. I swear to god, nothing has ever felt this good.

That was GORGEOUS, I was actually holding my breath until Dominic bucked his hips. Then I groaned and came a little. Just saying.

Without a hand on my cock, I'm coming.

But that, THAT was where you killed me. Him, on top, going for it and coming simply from that without touching himself is one of the hottest things ever. EVER.

And the nipples, and armpits... I could just.. die.

I love your writing like burning, bb, believe it. <3 <3

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