Yay you posted! I've missed this story so much. Coming back to the update....WOAH! I didn't see that coming!
I was starting to love these little trysts Matthew and Dominic were having at the library but this one just got so emotional. Out of no where Dom started that conversation and suddenly the filthy, carnal nature because something deep and meaningful. I loved the way you wrote the sudden change in the atmosphere. It flowed so perfectly.
"I will," I continued, "have you tonight. Hot, and begging beneath me as I make love to you. That is how I'm going to have you. Nothing we do will ever be as dirty as 'fucking.'"
*wipes tears* Wow, that was just stunning! I have no other words actually, you left me quite speechless.
But the end, I was not expecting. A part of me knew this might happen but when it actually did I was shocked! But I'm guessing Ellen would be cool, yeah? The doubt was already planted in her mind.
I'll stop rambling now. Thank you for bringing this fic back! <333
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I was starting to love these little trysts Matthew and Dominic were having at the library but this one just got so emotional. Out of no where Dom started that conversation and suddenly the filthy, carnal nature because something deep and meaningful. I loved the way you wrote the sudden change in the atmosphere. It flowed so perfectly.
"I will," I continued, "have you tonight. Hot, and begging beneath me as I make love to you. That is how I'm going to have you. Nothing we do will ever be as dirty as 'fucking.'"
*wipes tears* Wow, that was just stunning! I have no other words actually, you left me quite speechless.
But the end, I was not expecting. A part of me knew this might happen but when it actually did I was shocked! But I'm guessing Ellen would be cool, yeah? The doubt was already planted in her mind.
I'll stop rambling now. Thank you for bringing this fic back! <333