I adored this chapter, even though it was really painful to read (literally) I loved every word you wrote.
I’m sorry this was a difficult chapter for you to write but I have to say it was lovely and the conversation with Vida was perfect!! It seems like it was just what Matthew needed. I can’t even find words to tell you how beautiful every one of your words was, you really are an amazing writer and you have a great talent to transmit emotions through your stories on a way that your readers can feel what your characters are feeling and in this case you can suffer with them.
I loved how Mathew admitted that he’s in love with Dominic, it was a really sweet part that shone between all the hurt and anger he was feeling. And when he talked about wanting Dom in his life no matter what was really heartbreaking, you had me crying there.
I think it was brilliant how you closed the chapter (you always do btw) with Matt painting over Dominic’s side of the wall, even though it was really sad, it was a strong gesture from Matt’s “the wall finally becoming his own” and I’m really glad he decided to have a space just for him, no matter what happens with Dom in the future.
Thank you so much for this chapter, it was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333 I can’t wait to read Dominic’s perspective.
Btw that picture of Matt is beautiful!!!!!!! He’s so gorgeous; it is obvious why Dom can’t resist him ;)
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I’m sorry this was a difficult chapter for you to write but I have to say it was lovely and the conversation with Vida was perfect!! It seems like it was just what Matthew needed. I can’t even find words to tell you how beautiful every one of your words was, you really are an amazing writer and you have a great talent to transmit emotions through your stories on a way that your readers can feel what your characters are feeling and in this case you can suffer with them.
I loved how Mathew admitted that he’s in love with Dominic, it was a really sweet part that shone between all the hurt and anger he was feeling. And when he talked about wanting Dom in his life no matter what was really heartbreaking, you had me crying there.
I think it was brilliant how you closed the chapter (you always do btw) with Matt painting over Dominic’s side of the wall, even though it was really sad, it was a strong gesture from Matt’s “the wall finally becoming his own” and I’m really glad he decided to have a space just for him, no matter what happens with Dom in the future.
Thank you so much for this chapter, it was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333
I can’t wait to read Dominic’s perspective.
Btw that picture of Matt is beautiful!!!!!!! He’s so gorgeous; it is obvious why Dom can’t resist him ;)