First of all, I'm sorry about what happened between your friend and you, and that you had to relive the memories when writing this chapter. Although I don't know what had happened exactly, but I can only imagine the difficulty.
You wrote this chapter beautifully. I could definitely feel Matthew's hurt; that physical ache in my chest. I think, you definitely have a way with delivering heavy emotions through your words and they are evident in your other fics, as well. The way the kiss ended was difficult to read, not to mention the argument. I really hope that they'll find their way back to each other after this.
This really stuck to me though, The wall before him contained a vast unpainted area in its center, the place in the middle where he and Dominic were supposed to meet. The distance between the green was a canyon of rejection and unfulfilled desires.
Oh, and the way Matthew still wanted Dominic in his life whichever way possible, was definitely very, very heartbreaking. Great chapter, darling! <3
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You wrote this chapter beautifully. I could definitely feel Matthew's hurt; that physical ache in my chest. I think, you definitely have a way with delivering heavy emotions through your words and they are evident in your other fics, as well. The way the kiss ended was difficult to read, not to mention the argument. I really hope that they'll find their way back to each other after this.
This really stuck to me though, The wall before him contained a vast unpainted area in its center, the place in the middle where he and Dominic were supposed to meet. The distance between the green was a canyon of rejection and unfulfilled desires.
Oh, and the way Matthew still wanted Dominic in his life whichever way possible, was definitely very, very heartbreaking. Great chapter, darling! <3