I think if this were to happen in real life, it wouldn't be so perfect "i love you!" "oh i love you too!" "YAY." I don't think that's how anyone in this situation would react, even myself. I mean, I've never been engaged and then kissed a woman, but I don't think anything about this situation could come out easy. And I'm happy that you feel the same. I knew people were going to get sad with this chapter, but it is crucial to their relationship and their growth as characters.
Julia is a strong woman, and I do want people to feel bad for her. But i don't want her to be pitied. She is....honestly, the love of my life. She's the woman I wish I was, the woman I want to be. Sometimes I feel like many parts of myself have gone into her. And while her relationship is falling apart, she is a fighter and a woman who knows what she wants and needs. But she will never be cruel or bitchy about it. And she really LOVES Dominic, and the fact that her love for him is the true definition of what love is, it's EXTREMELY important to the future of this story. /random hints and spoilers lol
That isn't to say Matthew is weak, because he isn't. He's just hurting and broken. He needs someone to pick him back up and show him how to move on by himself. He has someone, he just needs to remember that he does ;)
This comment was beautiful and it really makes me happy to know that you feel I wrote the emotions well. I had a difficult time with this chapter because 1. I have never been in a real, serious relationship and 2. I felt like I had been away from this too long to really get the flow of it back.
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I think if this were to happen in real life, it wouldn't be so perfect "i love you!" "oh i love you too!" "YAY." I don't think that's how anyone in this situation would react, even myself. I mean, I've never been engaged and then kissed a woman, but I don't think anything about this situation could come out easy. And I'm happy that you feel the same. I knew people were going to get sad with this chapter, but it is crucial to their relationship and their growth as characters.
Julia is a strong woman, and I do want people to feel bad for her. But i don't want her to be pitied. She is....honestly, the love of my life. She's the woman I wish I was, the woman I want to be. Sometimes I feel like many parts of myself have gone into her. And while her relationship is falling apart, she is a fighter and a woman who knows what she wants and needs. But she will never be cruel or bitchy about it. And she really LOVES Dominic, and the fact that her love for him is the true definition of what love is, it's EXTREMELY important to the future of this story. /random hints and spoilers lol
That isn't to say Matthew is weak, because he isn't. He's just hurting and broken. He needs someone to pick him back up and show him how to move on by himself. He has someone, he just needs to remember that he does ;)
This comment was beautiful and it really makes me happy to know that you feel I wrote the emotions well. I had a difficult time with this chapter because 1. I have never been in a real, serious relationship and 2. I felt like I had been away from this too long to really get the flow of it back.
<333 Thank you. And I love you <33