http://muser-anivita.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] muser-anivita.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lalalive23 2010-12-03 07:30 am (UTC)

Yes you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have missed this so much, you have no idea. I’m really happy you posted a new chapter ;)
So where do I begin? It was a beautiful chapter (well your updates are always beautiful, so there is no novelty there) I love how their relationship and their emotions are dipper and more complex with every line you wrote. Dominic’s head seems like huge mess right now. I loved how you described his thoughts and his confusion about how he’s feeling about Matt, and how he tends to compare almost every aspect of their friendship with his relationship with Julia. And that he’s feeling jealous of Evan even if he doesn´t want to admit it.

The studio scene was AMAZING!!! I really liked Ian and I’m glad he liked Matt so much (how could he not to) The image of Matt singing in front of Dom for the first time made smile so much. I’m dying to know what was going through Dominic’s mind in that moment. I’m sure that had something to do with him exiting the studio.
The embrace part was lovely ;) “It was poignantly clear that neither wanted to. Gravity seemed to pull them closer and, as Matthew attempted to step away completely, he was sure he could hear Dom release a small whimper” this just made my heart swell

Thank you so much for updating, like I said I was really missing this story :)
It was a brilliant chapter, you can be sure it is not “lacking quality” like you said in your notes. I was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you´re feeling better now :)
*hugs*

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