I, um.... I, uh... don't know really, uh, what to say. Like.. uh... fuck.
Damn, this was just... lol seriously, I do not know what to say! I was questioning whether I should read this or not, 'cause... to be honest, bondage and violence isn't really my thing but after thinking about it (yes, I am that lame lol), I thought that, what the hell, I've loved every single one of your writings. And, voila! Here I am again.
Now. I'm not gonna lie. This piece scared the crap out of me, especially the beginning. I tend to feel really, really awful when reading about people being treated like shit and the way you wrote Dom's situation and feelings and ache and nerves and... !! God, it was so realistic. I really did feel awful reading it, and I actually felt scared of what would happen.
And then there was the Bellamy. Oh. Em. Gee. That man scared the hell out of me. Straight from the beginning, from sitting there with his precious snake and being all... scary, he was the epitome of domination.
Between the filth and the marks, there was nothing sexual about him anymore.
That's what he thinks. Obviously, that was not the case. But after seven years of slaving like that, you probably don't have very much self-esteem left. And I must admit I was, too, a bit shocked to see how much pleasure Matthew felt from pleasuring Dom. Didn't quite expect that.
"Your father thought you were nothing, so you became nothing."
Shivers. Yep, you heard me. That gave me shivers.
Then there was the sex. Dear. God.
He was wolfish, animalistic, and dragging his mouth along his skin like he wanted to taste Dom's beating heart.
Who was it being devoured by Matthew again? What? It wasn't me? But I could have sworn it was... Jeez, your writing skills are absolutely mad. I love the way you manage to get not only feelings, but smells and tastes in there as well. Like somone else here said: absolutely overwhelmed my senses.
No where in their coupling had he smelled the man he had grown to want. / Feeling utterly degraded and confused, he inhaled shakily as he ran his face along his outstretched arm to wipe a tear from his cheek.
There. I just... the fact that Dominic don't hate Matthew's guts for keeping him like a slave or a prisoner, but instead growing almost fond of him... that after seven years of waiting to meet him, all he feel is disappointment. Way to break my heart! But then... THEN! THAT ENDING! I literally wanted to punch the air and wail in happiness, I don't know why lol! But, gah, mustn't that have felt so good for Dominic?
Summary: loved it. It's all I have to say. It was dark, filthy, erotic, thrilling, scary, bittersweet, beautiful. I really do think it was amazing, and I do not regret reading it after all. Fantastic job as always, you *tackles* <333
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Just read that post you linked to... so sorry to hear you're having a rough time, dear, I really do hope things work out soon :( *hugs tightly* take care, sweets! <333
it's me, dissecting your fic again...
Damn, this was just... lol seriously, I do not know what to say! I was questioning whether I should read this or not, 'cause... to be honest, bondage and violence isn't really my thing but after thinking about it (yes, I am that lame lol), I thought that, what the hell, I've loved every single one of your writings. And, voila! Here I am again.
Now. I'm not gonna lie. This piece scared the crap out of me, especially the beginning. I tend to feel really, really awful when reading about people being treated like shit and the way you wrote Dom's situation and feelings and ache and nerves and... !! God, it was so realistic. I really did feel awful reading it, and I actually felt scared of what would happen.
And then there was the Bellamy. Oh. Em. Gee. That man scared the hell out of me. Straight from the beginning, from sitting there with his precious snake and being all... scary, he was the epitome of domination.
Between the filth and the marks, there was nothing sexual about him anymore.
That's what he thinks. Obviously, that was not the case. But after seven years of slaving like that, you probably don't have very much self-esteem left. And I must admit I was, too, a bit shocked to see how much pleasure Matthew felt from pleasuring Dom. Didn't quite expect that.
"Your father thought you were nothing, so you became nothing."
Shivers. Yep, you heard me. That gave me shivers.
Then there was the sex. Dear. God.
He was wolfish, animalistic, and dragging his mouth along his skin like he wanted to taste Dom's beating heart.
Who was it being devoured by Matthew again? What? It wasn't me? But I could have sworn it was... Jeez, your writing skills are absolutely mad. I love the way you manage to get not only feelings, but smells and tastes in there as well. Like somone else here said: absolutely overwhelmed my senses.
No where in their coupling had he smelled the man he had grown to want. / Feeling utterly degraded and confused, he inhaled shakily as he ran his face along his outstretched arm to wipe a tear from his cheek.
There. I just... the fact that Dominic don't hate Matthew's guts for keeping him like a slave or a prisoner, but instead growing almost fond of him... that after seven years of waiting to meet him, all he feel is disappointment. Way to break my heart! But then... THEN! THAT ENDING! I literally wanted to punch the air and wail in happiness, I don't know why lol! But, gah, mustn't that have felt so good for Dominic?
Summary: loved it. It's all I have to say. It was dark, filthy, erotic, thrilling, scary, bittersweet, beautiful. I really do think it was amazing, and I do not regret reading it after all. Fantastic job as always, you *tackles* <333
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Just read that post you linked to... so sorry to hear you're having a rough time, dear, I really do hope things work out soon :( *hugs tightly* take care, sweets! <333