....... sweet baby jesus, that was... delicious. i love me some erotic literature, and the way you used that in their encounter was just lovely and hot as all get out. and the desperation of the moment and the passion between them... you can just really tell they're in love. i loved it. :3 well done!

(and good luck with school, i feel you on the bad student bit. writing an undergrad thesis is no joke and yet here i am reading fanfic anyway, bahaha. whatever, life is too short to make yourself miserable over homework!!)